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Hi!

 

How many of you have play tennis and gone to a summer camp?

Well, I was enough to have that experience.

I had this experience in summer vacation.

I went to Yamanaka-lake for 1 week.

 

I played tennis and took lessons every day.

I played a match and games.

I played sparker.

It was very enjoyable.

 

I lived a full life during that time, and I learned a lot of new tennis skills.

My tennis experience made me very happy!

 

Thanks for listening!

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  1. Hi Yuna! I could not find my comments on your blog, so here is your corrected speech again. Had you updated it at all? This is what I corrected before:

    How many of you have play tennis and gone to a summer camp? Well, I was lucky enough to have that experience. It was so exciting. I had this experience in summer vacation. I went to Yamanaka rake for 1 week.

    I played tennis and took lessons every day. I played many games and matches and improved my skills. It was a very enjoyable time. (PLEASE EXPLAIN IN DETAIL: WHO DID YOU GO WITH WHAT DID YOU EAT? WHERE DID YOU SLEEP? HOW LONG DID YOU PRACTICE EVERY DAY? DID YOU HAVE A BIG TOURNAMENT? WHAT WERE YOUR CHALLENGES? WHAT WAS THE HIGHLIGHT? ETC….)

    I lived a full life during that time, and I learned a lot of new tennis skills. My tennis experience made me very happy! Thanks for listening!

    OK, please finish your speech and then:

    1) print
    2) highlight 10 + gestures and voice inflection (stress, stretch, pause)
    3) memorize speech WITH gestures and voice inflection
    4) practice practice practice!

    Remember the 5 places to use gestures and voice inflection:
    1) numbers
    2) descriptive words (adjectives etc.)
    3) comparison words
    4) negative words (not, no, never…)
    5) action words (verbs)

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